This is a bad beginning. Why do I think of turning to you when I am depressed? Perhaps I should write:
'I am writing to you to let you know I miss you.'
This sounds too sentimental. Perhaps I can start with weather:
'This winter is much colder than last one. It snows a lot.'
This is silly.
Or
'I dreamed of you again last night. Not a bad dream.'
This sounds like a lie. I dreamed of you, but I cannot remember what happened.
So in the end, I wrote nothing.
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